this some tight shit. nicely done.
I wish you made the pulse quicker. But I was always thinking about rapping over this song, so I'll think about it.
What do you mean pulse? Because mabey I can fix it.
Okay THIS was some fucking funny shit.
Since my last post unfortunately got deleted...
Okay, since you were kind of angry last time I posted I decided to analyze your lyrics a bit more.
Okay lets start off with how much you hate war-spawn for "stealing samples". How do you steal a sample? I don't get that to begin with. It doesn't make any sense. You can take and alter pieces of music if it's less than a certain amount of time. i don't remember the exact amount, but it's completely legal, so it wouldn't be "stealing". Look at Kanye West, or Sean Kingston, Justin Timberlake and Timbaland. They all use samples in their music. And apparently so do you. (FF8 much?).
Now lets talk about your "extensive vocabulary". What was it..."big fat mumbling mouf?" Wow...those are some big words for a big boy like you! I'm honestly surprised you could use such words! My own BIG BAD LEJIN so tough and baad. Yea this is called SARCASM. Ever heard of it? I hope so, or you'll take what I just said completely literally. Oh and for the record, try recording in one take and lets see how you roll. I bet you recorded this song over and over again to get it just right cause you don't have the vocal skills necessary for enunciating properly on a rap.
Oh and for the record, if you're so big and bad, why'd you block me from responding to your PM? Scared I was going to out smart you again? Look who's the frightened little bitch. "Look at me, I'm big and tough. I'm an internet gangsta. But I'm too scared to hear people respond to what I have to say! So I'm gna block this badass motherfucker cause he's so much better than me."
Oh the statement in quotations before this sentence is your thoughts btw. Just in case you couldnt comprehend that on your own.
Well all in all I like your voice tone, but that's about it. Your lyrics suck, your logic doesn't make any sense, and your childish.
It's passed your bed time. Go to sleep bitch.
Oh and here's some sympathy from the BAMF.
Thanks for expressing how much you hate to admit im a perfect 10.
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